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Eve Was Weak by ~luminescent-rose:iconluminescent-rose:

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Filling the corpse of my soul
Losing the thought of Virginity
Depths between right and wrong
Scroll of the mind
Disconnection
Answer not found
Disturbance of endless insomnia
Behold answer
Shot at the plan
Point the spot
Wave of Patience
Blank corruption
Seeking for unspoken words
Floating above your soul
Dress your presence
Penny for a dime
Joyful payment
Revengeful plead
Anger scene for the sake of Eve
Eve was weak.
©2006-2009 ~luminescent-rose
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Author's Comments

just wrote it in a split second

most of it doesn't make sense

i wrote whatever came to mind

one word that i thought of lead to sentence, which probably doesnt make sense.

hope you enjoy.

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~HybridSmiley Jul 13, 2006, 8:43:05 PM
Nice work again lady :D

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~luminescent-rose Jul 13, 2006, 8:44:03 PM
do you think it doesn't make sense? if it doesn't make sense, does it still have good like.. not flow.. but ... i dont know how to explain it, nevermind.

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~HybridSmiley Jul 13, 2006, 8:47:24 PM
I thought it was just a confusing collection of thoughts :hmm: but it kept my attention :D

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~luminescent-rose Jul 13, 2006, 8:48:26 PM
k thankies:).. i like that it doesnt make much sense cause i just wrote sentences that sounded alright, and i was hoping that maybe it would all fit together, but it didnt work out quite too well.

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~HybridSmiley Jul 13, 2006, 8:48:57 PM
S'allright you'll learn from your confusing mishaps =P

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~luminescent-rose Jul 13, 2006, 8:51:34 PM
my confusing mishaps create poetry. even if its not good poetry, it's still writing.

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~HybridSmiley Jul 13, 2006, 8:52:15 PM
:heart:

:P that felt appropriate :laughing:

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~luminescent-rose Jul 13, 2006, 8:54:43 PM
yes yes

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~HybridSmiley Jul 13, 2006, 11:41:52 PM
:lol:

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